The rigidity is hard to melt away. Cold. Brittle. I feel like she’ll snap without me. My heat, the warmth that comes over me, will curl over time. I wait for morning when she’ll reach for me. Needing me. Sharp, pointed, jagged and cut, I make her hard edges soft. When she looks in the mirror I know what her expectation is. Perfection. The kind of control that’s kept just under a flame. The kind I can not give her.
Curling Iron
7 responses to “Curling Iron”
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Excellent! Fiction is such few words! And what an Ending! Hearty Kudos. 🙂
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Lovely. Interesting to read from the point of view of the curler. 🙂
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fiction makes us grow wings…fly….
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Clever personification. The erotic nuances made me assume the tong is male.
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There is a real quality to your writing voice. I can see you writing great novels, just from reading these amazing flashes. It’s lovely to find a blog that grips me 🙂
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Your prose looks like poetry.
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